I really like all of the changes that you have made over the course of this project. You have been able to create something very interesting and dynamic. I really like the repetition of certain effects that help to make this video very cohesive. Overall I think it works very well and the timing is great. Good job!
Very elegant solution and updates. It seems like the last "I have a dream" jumps in a little bit before the audio, but that might just be my wireless. Double check that it is ok on your file. Really nice work.
I like that you can still see the "I have a dream today" at the very end even though it is very faded. The changes you made make your movie so much stronger...it looks great! I don't know if it's the music or the actual speech but I always seem to get a little emotional when I watch yours :)
You express the whole mood well. It is settled.I like that. And I think it is also good to emphasize or differentiate something important or what he accented with color or something like that.
"Live out the true meaning..." seems to come in slower than the speech. "will one day live in a nation" could align with something. It's too close to the edge of the "o". I really like yours. The tone of the whole thing is great! Very simple and sophisticated.
The font does a great job of fitting the speech. I think that the simple black and white colors also is a good idea and goes along with the theme of the speech.
So I'm not 100% sure, but I think you need to add Jr. after Martin Luther King in the beginning part. Looks great though, I really like how you emphasized "I have a dream" by having it in all caps. I also love the "four" animation, it's so neat! The glow that you added on the last I have a dream, looks great too! Good job Jennifer!! =D
I like how you made I have a dream bigger, I wonder if you could do a little bitt more with it though, considering it is such a powerful statement. Like change the background or something. But it looks great!!
13 comments:
I really like all of the changes that you have made over the course of this project. You have been able to create something very interesting and dynamic. I really like the repetition of certain effects that help to make this video very cohesive. Overall I think it works very well and the timing is great. Good job!
Good mood, the script typeface is used in good places. Not overused. I feel like the timing in the beginning is a little off.
Very elegant solution and updates. It seems like the last "I have a dream" jumps in a little bit before the audio, but that might just be my wireless. Double check that it is ok on your file. Really nice work.
I like that you can still see the "I have a dream today" at the very end even though it is very faded. The changes you made make your movie so much stronger...it looks great! I don't know if it's the music or the actual speech but I always seem to get a little emotional when I watch yours :)
You express the whole mood well. It is settled.I like that. And I think it is also good to emphasize or differentiate something important or what he accented with color or something like that.
"that my" comes in a bit fast after i have a dream.
i like it. i think it captures a good mood
good job, you captured the mood of the speech well
"Live out the true meaning..." seems to come in slower than the speech.
"will one day live in a nation" could align with something. It's too close to the edge of the "o".
I really like yours. The tone of the whole thing is great! Very simple and sophisticated.
I think you have done a great job making a very elegant, emotionally driven video. Great tone.
I like the typefaces you chose. The black and white also keeps it looking sophisticated and clean. It is simplistic and looks polished.
The font does a great job of fitting the speech. I think that the simple black and white colors also is a good idea and goes along with the theme of the speech.
So I'm not 100% sure, but I think you need to add Jr. after Martin Luther King in the beginning part. Looks great though, I really like how you emphasized "I have a dream" by having it in all caps. I also love the "four" animation, it's so neat! The glow that you added on the last I have a dream, looks great too! Good job Jennifer!! =D
I like how you made I have a dream bigger, I wonder if you could do a little bitt more with it though, considering it is such a powerful statement. Like change the background or something. But it looks great!!
Post a Comment